Black Poetry : Single

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticAlize, Oct 21, 2004.

  1. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my fear of failing you with my love keeps me from offering my heart
    its taked me through all the hurt and disdain before it's had the chance to start
    i'm crying tears for no other reason than to get it out the way
    everything will come crashing doen eventually... one day
    we're gonna fall in love passionatley, hard, and deep
    dreams will intertwine with fantasy creating a reality we'll wanna keep
    we'll ake love from the stars to the sun, straight into heaven's reign
    sitting high above everyone's expectations with nothing to love and everthing to gain
    but it won't last long, nothing ever does
    forcing us to face what coulda been and what was
    so kiss me slowly and gently, and enjoy this moment in time
    because this will be the only chance you'll have to be mine
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa! let the love flow to feel the passion
    this was well done keep flowing
     
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    OH GOSH...
    the best part of love
    falling in love
    to marinate that love
    as you have in this flow
    wonderful poem :)


    Blue
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow, no fear in falling in love, just live and learn
     
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    Sometimes you just got to have faith, difficult to do when you've been hurt, but love has to have the chance to breathe. I felt this....flow on poet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm really feelin this. Much love to you
     
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    if she's "the one", let the resistance go!!
    but trust, l feel you completely..

    nice poetry,,
    jh.
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I realle felt this poem, (yea I finally got in :D) and im glad you brought me here cuz all these poems are healing my soul, taking sum of the anger ad stress out my lyfe, if you piece that exam together lyk u wrote this poem you might b teachin tha class nxt yr.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...:read:
    Love deals with so many emotions
    but it is NEVER really love until you feel the hurt
    because that shows you the value of what you may really have
    :read:
    wonderful read :)
    share the poetic love and give poetic love to receive poetic love :)
     
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