Black Poetry : Single Fathers Discontent

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Knowlove81, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. Knowlove81

    Knowlove81 Member MEMBER

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    This lil peice again is a non fictional piece,Right Everything i write is from personal experence. I will start to post my life in Poetry Called "Reality
    Writings" And posting them 2 time per week starting with me 1st poem I ever wrote that expressed my inner soul. I hope you enjoy. Give me feedback Please. I need It.

    I live in hell sometimes it feels like there ain’t no help
    He sendin down his apostles and I scream watching the angel’s wing’s melt

    Depressed and alone is what you think but that’s not me
    I’m original and real, call it how I see it, no carbon copy

    Got to adapt to if the world its turnin cold so now I gotta get colder
    It’s hard raising a child when u have to constantly look over your shoulder

    Thought when u have a kid u just got to be there and give your child support
    Watch evil women plot on our money with the government, they call it child support

    I’m not new to the ways of the world but now I’m a father
    But I understand why some guy’s look at they life like why bother

    How we deadbeat’s when some women use they kid’s as a negotiating chips
    Wonder why we hate em so and be so close to sparkin a *****

    What crazy is a lot of women think that the ****’s so funny
    Knowin that’s we’ll spend our last so our kids’ll never go hungry

    To me that’s hell you see I just wanted Raise my son
    Not to be bleed dry for money I got to blaze a gun


    Knowlove81(Pen Name) Circa 2006
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Knowlove81
    Welcome welcome welcome !
    Very interesting drop.
    Indeed you have written about a very serious issue
    from the man prospective, and this is indeed what we
    need more of so we can get a better understanding
    about the problems that effect our children
    in the end.
    It may start out with as you have said
    but in the end, are some women having kids to supplement there income
    It is never one sided.
    much love and respect
    please keep the flow coming

    Peace and Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing here poet
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow same fustrations as i go through. thanks for sharing!
     
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