Black Poetry : Sing My Soul

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Nov 4, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You tell me all the time
    You would if you could
    Do anything in the world for me
    You would climb to the highest peak
    If it would bring just a small smile from me
    You would give up this whole world
    If you knew that I would forever be your girl
    You would rewrite the history of man
    Just to make sure my heart stayed in your hands
    Go through heel and back to be sure of
    Your dedication to me
    Show me the universe no matter the time it took
    for one moment in my eyes
    Yes just for one look

    I never told you that I wanted the world
    Or that I would ever desire not to be in your world
    I only want you to be true to yourself
    Because then and only then can you be true to me
    You had me at hello and have held on strong
    Ever since
    I just want you to give me your truth
    Let us be what the great desing desires
    All I've ever wanted from you is for you to give me your best
    And leave the rest to time
    Just sing my soul and everything will be fine

    Sing my soul at ease and you shall forever have me
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I only want you to be true to yourself
    Because then and only then can you be true to me"
    It's lines like these that make the heart of this piece stand out. Intense flow poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love how u drop this here soul searching
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow poet
     
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    I wish I could sing...How bout if I hum..lol..This was beautifully scribe...I felt it very much..Thanx 4 sharing...


    Peace!
     
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    Nice flowing...enjoyed this pc


    Angel
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW FROM ONE SOUL TO ANOTHER THAT WAS JUST RIGHT ON POINT I'M FEELING HOW YOU EXPRESSED YOUR SELF ON THAT. IT REALLY HITS HOME WITH ME AND MY GIRL THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE KEEP DOING YOUR THING.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for relating to the truth i'm trying to send out to the world
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Sing my soul" I like that :)

    very melodically uplifting...

    I'm a get me a man that can sing my soul :read: lol

    well I might have to settle for "rap my soul" lol

    beautiful write sistah :)
     
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