Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sincerely Mr. wrong

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DeepSistaSoul, Apr 4, 2002.

  1. DeepSistaSoul

    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He walks by with his sexy brown skin, his eyes like water to a hydrophobic, drawing you in and then you are in his grip take a sip of his love and ecstasy. He gets next to you, caressin' you, like R. kelly says feelin' on ya booty.
    Ya sprung hung.
    in his rope of deception.
    like a snake in the grass
    waiting for the right moment to strike.
    ooooh but he smells so good.
    He lays the love down like a true vet.
    he wears the hell out of a suit.
    and has a 6 figure salary.
    his eyes tell his story, like his heart hides the pain.
    once in love, and slapped down he remained scorn.
    never to trust another woman, never to let her close.
    rather to hur her than to feel hurt in his heart.
    despite the pain he brings, he takes you home for
    just one night
    when you awaken, he is gone.
    on his pillow lys a note that ends
    Sincerely Mr. Wrong.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista

    I've been reading you. Your flow is madd deep. I love your "voice" and the way you slangin it.

    Welcome home!

    :heart:

    a
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce thanks a million sister, and You have mad my light want to shine brighter. Thanks for the love, You are so kind.

    The deepest of them all
    DEEPSISTASOUL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u pose an essence of great beauty da flow is awesome!!!
    keep movin as ya pen scribe lovin it all sistah! Queen
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks my friend, It is wonderful to see that what I have been doing since I was six makes other happy.

    The deepest of them all

    deepsistasoul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya pen flows sweet and what u pose is masterful
    thank u 4 sharing a piece of u upon dis house of poetry
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you once more you sweet brotherly man you, you
    make a sista blush-------you make a sista feel welcome here at destee's
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's not of me but my heart whom welcome thee so openly
    i am love ............ur welcome Queen
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tell ya, you really are professional, Your flow is unique. sort of like the way the ocean rises and falls on the shore.
     
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    and u r like many winds blowin
    ya skillz like da sun rays of beauty
    da flow u pose is mercyful to a soul
    u r da poetess of deeper thoughts
    a BLACK QUEEN .....thank u
     
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