Black Poetry : Sincere

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Mar 16, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart's yearning...
    For more of you...
    All the time...

    What can I do?

    The pain hurts so much
    And I can't deny

    That I'm raptured in your love

    And I thought if I took my time
    Our love would be fine

    Sometimes I wander
    Even if you're
    All Minez....

    Sometimes I wander
    So I'd be prepared
    And won't be brokenhearted again...

    And you tell me
    Not to worry
    That you love me too.

    It's hard for me to trust you sometimes
    Because I'm so naive with you

    So blindly in love
    I love you sooo deeply

    Words couldn't say
    The love I feel for you
    In this way

    You're my sweetheart
    Nothing's wrong with love

    If the world had a little more of it
    Maybe we wouldn't be showered
    With disaster

    I love you so much
    Because you are my man

    Sometimes you make me feel like a little child
    And it's pitiful how I'm dependant on you sometimes

    How do I go on
    Living with out you

    I could never repeat again

    You've open up your heart
    And I have again

    Can't stay away from you
    I don't want to

    I'll never be the same

    Desert Storm
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYYUMMM

    my sistah. it must be wonderful to feel love so deeply. he's a very lucky guy.

    continue you flow.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** storm
    you bringing it here

    dssNY

    feeling ya a thousand percent
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you make me feel like a little child
    And it's pitiful how I'm dependant on you sometimes


    Beautifully written...the whole thang :bawling:
    I tries to be in control but I keep losing it. :)
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luv this. so sweet, so soulful, so real!

    tyte, sistuh

    dee
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah this here is Sweet flo!

    I can dig it!
    Lovely:)
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true for so many...
    and me too once upon a time...
    sometimes when you love blindly
    you've got to remind yourself
    open your eyes and SEE.
    love the flow.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    DS got a love jones *singing*

    ;) go gurl! pd :)
     
  9. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha ha ha

    Yeah feelin ya hea, no joke!
    Thanks for all da reply's loving ya guyz!
    Poeticdelight you said enough!
    Desert Storm
     
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