Black Poetry : Sincere Apology

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  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~ If only he knew how sorry she was ~

    In the blackest of nights
    Her mind is scattered,
    and her heart has hardened
    to all that exists

    Forgetting what she should remember
    Harboring thoughts of that which is best for her to forget
    She has become lost....
    Lost in herself

    What exactly should she be doing?
    Why is it so hard for her to be, to live...not just exist

    She forgot that which is so important to him..
    because maybe a part of her didn't want to remember
    She congratulated you and was happy for you,
    only to forget because maybe she wished it was her...

    wished that she was loved unconditionally
    was viewed and appreciated for the kween that she is
    wished that she could have a family and truly and freely love her man

    she wished that you were hers
    and she was yours
    she wished to feel your touch
    she wished love that the love for each other would pour....
    overfilling each others cup
    constantly sipping from one another
    staying drunk with each others love

    No sooner than her thought of him and her becoming we could be
    it just became a fantasy
    He was gone from somewhere he had never even truly been

    Her heart was broken...and in time has done some mending...
    no matter what place in time...
    they had their moment..She was his and he was hers

    it was not an intentional thing, please understand..
    She had to sit and think to myself...
    and yes, she can recall you telling her of that important thing, and she remembers just how she felt at that moment in time...

    Maybe he is seriouly through with her..

    Should this be the case, please understand,
    She did remember...her mechanisms of defense were not always the best...

    But believe her when she says,

    "I am truly sorry
    Please forgive me"


    Blk Kween
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kween Get out of my head !

    you have peeped into the corner of my heart !!!!!
    you just took me all the way there and back
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kween, i'm lovin' it...very well written piece, dear poetess. keep on scribin'.
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seriously deep

    this is writing to the core, BK...
    sis...write this down for us!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BK

    com'on ya laid this piece out wit mind taking
    very nicely written .........:kiss:
     
  6. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good to see you scribing again...although I prefer to see you in a happier flow....Keep your head up.
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kween,

    although this peice is written from a woman's view, i find it to not be gender specific for there are many who walk this path missing the moment to express their feelings...

    beautifully scribed poet....
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight Flow Kween
     
  9. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Bishop

    kinda melodramatic but nice, don't you think

    :confused:
     
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