Black Poetry : Since You Left

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by adefinitediva, Feb 19, 2002.

  1. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My life has not been the same
    Since the day you left my side
    My heart has been filled with pain
    And it's hard for me to hide.

    Before, I never imagined being without you
    Now, your gentle touch I cannot feel
    I've asked why it had to happen, Love
    Much to my avail, no answers still.

    I'm sorry I never told you
    How much I really care
    But if I could, I truly would
    Never another "I Love You" spare.

    With each rising of the morning's sun
    I always think of you
    And how you used to make me feel
    Whenever we did what lovers do. :crying:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always...

    let the ones you love know just how much you love them.

    HEARTFELT.

    continue the flow.
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definiteD

    This is a sad piece.
    Many have felt this way
    at one time or another.
    I know I have.

    Scribe On Poetess! :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    got me crying ova here and stuff...:cry: nice flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well written yet sadly sad i feel da emotions
     
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