Black Poetry : Sin/namon (unfinished)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    midnight breezes
    blow against the
    matrix spread eagle
    on the sky

    saxophoned star tones
    siezes the silence
    and covers its mouth
    letting me here your
    scent in the wind

    Sin/namon

    linen never knew
    love like this
    and the muted silence
    never heard glancing
    skin sound off like
    violins

    and we haven't even
    met yet / yes even
    cotton dreams of being
    .....touched

    blak

    *this is unfinished if somebody wants to complete it...I would behonored but I'm letting it go. peace
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll ride shotgun on a stanza or two...

    ...someone else can flow like they know...

    :peace:
    GQ


    ...surely couldn't match the softness
    an impending serenity brings

    In bounds and leaps of majestic faith
    the climax completes its' journey,
    faltering not

    Sin/namon

    Stolen memories of wild
    dreams and harnessed
    screams blowing like Bird

    Burning like a candle in the breeze
    piping notes like piano bars
    that saturate souls in melodic
    tones
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all **** Verb & Que

    verb dis flow of beauty sit above da rest as GQ
    finished wit a blast bruthas ya'll got it going on:)
     
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    Blak

    You just gonna let this master piece go....?? Just like that? :lol:

    Boooooy, you are simply..... mmm. mmm. mmmm.
    ....irresistably..........smoothe ~ this piece is all of dat & den some more....go' on now witcha fine blak self!! :D


    Lovin' your way with words!!


    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back for more view
    dis was awesome scribing here
     
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    So True brotha Rich this was OFF the charts potent...
    thanks for the REWIND :)
     
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    This was somethin else...whew...one great flow into another.
     
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