Black Poetry : Sin In Us All---verse 1

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1 st verse---its real!!!!

my blind eyes- I see your troubles from yesterday...//
well-today is 2morrow, only 2 different days...//
live Your life like water-flow through in your own ways...//
man, the aire is itchin' to grab hold of ya face
And rip it all away..//
beFore ya know it-you got your (Face Off) like John..//
masked on to hide the ugliness
your only human-forget thats wrong....//
tainted sins got you feelin' radioactive-
trashin' the age and the way you live...//but your like,"fuggit!"-
the longer you stay in this hate you give,
the longer you'll just degrade your character..//--trust it..
i neva fall-i crash landed..//
outta my cell onto anotha plateu-leveled my planet..//
now I'm viewin' the demolition from anotha position up top....//
head bangin' like punk rock-submissioned from livin' crazed in oblivion, stop..//

switchin' lanes in my brain but this mind is ached up..//
these ladies are insane-they left their brains home covered in make-up..//
"papi stop me, i can't breathe no more!!"--mami you're inevitable..//
its a shame you ain't grow an inch of 'mind elevation'--which is soo incredible..//
i'm sorry love, I kno I'm crayzie--but this iz real...///
sorta like the love you have for GOD,but neva feel..//
LORD-these imperfectionz are stressin' me mentally..//
sentimentally i'm wrecked inside
watchin' my
reflection bendin' in front of me--why???..///

~~~talkin' to myself~~~

"Now whut you must do---
is stop thinkin'...//
cause on da real , man, you have some issues-
and i'm confused..//"

~~~talkin to my brotha~~~

remember those times we shared when we were young and 'stinky'..//
retrack ya mind , swing it back like a slinky,cuz now i don't kno what to do with you...//choose............choose.....
cuz Brother this romance is,
givin' you too many chances...//
this devious life we percieve
just leads
us to lettin' the Devil's(D'evilz)bong dance us..//
its slim(chance is slim)baby
never win, maybe
we could win....//
but sin never gives up--
so how We gon' give up sin..??//
if its a possibility then I am GOD spittin' lyrically..VOID!!!//
CUZ SIN IS IN US ALL--- fruck ya possibilities...NOISE!!!//

copyright 2001--------------Yeah i kno its long--just vibe w/ me...

"L.I.F.E.--Losin' It For Ever----or so you thought......:rolleyes: ":D
 

$$RICH$$

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