Black Poetry : Sin-cinnati (A Blak Man's Redemption)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The neo-lynch party
    has an old po(lice)litical agenda
    being put into action affirmatively
    in Sin-cinnati it's called
    kill the nappy /heads/the dreads/the locs
    black folks the brothers
    with spermicidal bullets
    ironically some brothers stand
    in pulpits pronouncing that
    blak people be "peaceful"
    we need to iron out the wrinkles
    in this blood covered flag that
    cloaks Sin-cinnati cloaks crimes
    against black people in Miami iron
    this **** out from "sea to shining sea"
    shatter the stars of those that think
    their super(ior) and break Mumia out
    from behind red, white, and blue bars

    The new agenda is to shoot blak men in the
    back of the head, in the back, in the black
    sending us to fade to black and I'm tired
    of ignorance ending so many brothers stories
    before the happy ending patience bending
    mind spinning Uncle Sam grinning and Clarence Uncle
    Thomas resides quietly behind his black robe
    mouth covered with a white hand how can one speak
    against the man with a clear mind when the enemy
    looks like your spouse love is love and life is life
    but real is real and there is a neo-lynch
    po(litical) agenda being put into action
    in Sin-cinnati and the baseball team ain't the only
    thing Red the roads bleed red (read Blood)
    and the po-lice-man are hitting homeruns while
    scratching their heads wondering where is
    the nearest vacation resorts for their "paid leave"
    vacation / now we're "terrorists" that's what they
    say when we resort to violence reacting to
    violence reacting to violence reacting to violence
    tired of reacting with no action 'cept sitting
    around a table with the kinsman of those that
    kill us and expect AKSHUN to be TAKUN...a fool's
    wish and we'll get shunned again when the po-lice-man's
    gun breaks wind again and disrupts our nasal
    passages with the stench of another dead brother
    ...those held under foot to long have begun
    to take akshun and rioting is the akshun...light a flame
    for me and burn down Sin-cinnati.

    (c) 2001 blakverb "off da top thinkin"
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! ****! ****!!....

    & there he goes again ya'll....

    VERB... do you eva ask yaself how "off da top
    ...............thinkin" can be so mutha f@#$in' tyght,
    ...............passionate, thought provoking, worded
    ...............perfectly & all dat? :)

    then you should!!

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me....uh umm...!!

    Dr. Cornell West....umh...is that you?!
    Ok, I thought so.....!!

    Blak - this **** hea is off da' chainers
    and ropers dear :heart:

    can you spell R.E.A.L.I.T.Y poetry any other way?!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWW HELL YEAH! You said it all baby, you said it all right.
    -7
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    Well put for just "off da top" thinkin' man!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb,

    you got my struggling even more to grasp my timbs cuz these thoughts have crowded my mid. no dobut thoughts off the top can be premeditated intellect murder...

    which at times is mos definitely needed...kill em with wisdom...son...wisdom...
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I echo the thoughts of those before me. off da top thinkin you say, I kain't wait for something yo *** is done meditated on.


    One
     
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    in full agreement

    Most times i hate to play
    the semi-militant, new wave revolutionist role ...
    but **** maan,
    If a city ever needed to be burnt down,
    it would be Cincinnati.

    When so much ugliness has oppressed its
    citizens, Cleanliness comes by FIRE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    redfacedracistasspigs get barbequed, next on CNN.
     
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    Mary don't you weep,
    Martha don't you moan

    Old negro spirituals
    In an underground village were sung,

    BUT we still underground,
    And I say we make things work for ourselves

    AND THE LAND OF THE FREE
    Was never intended for anyone
    Who isn't white

    THE HOME OF THE BRAVE,
    This is where we take our place

    FOUGHT AND DIED FOR THIS COUNTRY
    And we still don't get no RESPECT

    BECAUSE, White men and women
    Still look at grown AFRO~AMERICAN ADULTS
    As if we are still children
    LITTLE BOYS AND GURLS

    BUT NO MORE OF THIS PERSECUTION
    I MUST INSIST
    Trying to console Mary and Martha

    For they baby
    Lay dead in the streets

    The victim
    Of another racist WHITE police

    EXCUSES
    DON'T EXCUSE THE TRUTH

    AND THE YOUTH
    HAVE NO POSITIVE
    AFRO BROTHA AND SISTAH
    ROMODELS

    I'm tired of the racism
    That EXIST and we are still SLAVES IN THIS SOCIETY
    UNLESS WE TURN INTO AN OREO COOKIE
    AND STILL WE ARE EVEN PLAYIN OURSELVES

    BLACKVERB
    GENERATE DEEP THAWTS MY BROTHA

    THAT ONCE BROUGHT HOPE
    MY BROTHA

    TO A GENERATION THAT WAS LOST
    MY BROTHA

    AND NOW THEY EVEN ROB US OF OUR DESIRE
    TO DREAM OF BEAUTIFUL DAYZ

    ROB US OF OUR WILL TO SURVIVE
    THEY KILL US EVEN BEFORE
    WE ARE RAISED

    EVERY LIE
    AND SUBCONSCIENCE REPITIOUS DESIGN
    HAS RAPED US
    SPIRITUALLY AND PHYSICALLY
    RAPED EVERY WOMAN,MAN,AND CHILD

    FROM TURNING OUR THOUGHTS AROUND
    TO EUROCENTRIC WAYS

    THINKING OUR HAIR ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH
    THE COMB TEST AT THE DOOR
    AND THE BROWN PAPER BAG TEST

    I LAY THIS CASE AT REST
    ENOUGH SAID
    AND I SAY THAT TO SAY THIS

    ANOTHER UNDERGROUND NEEDS TO TAKE PLACE
    TO PROHIBIT THE "EVIL ONES" OUT
    WE FIRST NEED TO TAKE ONE STEP FURTHER
    TO MAKE SURE WE DON'T LEAVE A FOOT HOLD
    FOR "ANOTHER" TO BE ~ABLE~
    TO IMPRISON US ONCE AGAIN

    Loved your rythmes I am feeling this ~DEEP~

    Desert Storm
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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