Black Poetry : simply said*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (u know who this is...)

    Simply said*
    7/2/01
    11:00:01 AM

    Darlin’ babe—

    My soul clutches you—
    And you’re nowhere near—

    Ya don’t know what i go through—

    I feen for you
    Simply said.

    People try to make me remember their memories—
    I keep remembering you.

    I keep longing for you
    Needing you
    Heart pumping
    You
    Cuts bleeding
    You
    Eyes seeing
    You

    I’m pleading to—
    My other half—
    Hoping it just might be
    You

    *seek and ye shall find—

    You make me not wanna look no mo

    Simply said.

    It’s been you all the time—
    I just didn’t know it yet—
    Now I do—
    Thanking the most high profusely—
    He gave us
    Each other—

    Or gave me
    You
    Even for the world’s revolution—or
    Lifetimes a second in God’s eyes—
    He gave me sight of you...
    And I love him
    And you—

    Simply said. *

    thepoetsean
     
  2. DeJay

    DeJay MEMBER MEMBER

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    Fresh

    lovit lovit lovit :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany....


    dddddaaaang!!

    she be lucky... in-deed! & you continue to show
    me that you are talented beyond be-lief... :)

    *imalwaysdigginyoflow.*

    AlwaysLove. :)
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No wonder ima fan of yours!

    Brilliant!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so refreshing...
    thank you
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  6. blackstar

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    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    :spinstar: i'm just going to simply say :spinstar:
    :spinstar: this one of the most :spinstar:
    :spinstar: beautiful romance poems :spinstar:
    :spinstar: i have ever read :heart: :spinstar:
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin the complexity of this simplicity.

    BE
     
  8. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DeJay, GA, Reas, miss 7, Black*, and Heartbeat...

    Ain't NUTHIN' like the love y'all give!!!

    and thass fo sho'!

    thanks for the read

    (i'm watching y'all)

    *buries himself behind his rhyme-book*

    *peeks over*

    sean.
     
  9. Tantrum

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    This was beautiful
    You have been blessed
    And we aint mad at ya
     
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