Black Poetry : Simply R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Appreciate the quixotic me who loves
    you more than life itself in hypnotic
    love tones and gestures

    Holding you close like yesterday’s
    morning touch; remembering that
    tomorrow’s always promised to pure hearts
    and a kiss relaxed upon sweetest lips
    is simply

    R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C

    I offer the flame in my soul that knows no
    end to this sane but maddening hunger for
    your passionate pleasure; providing a sweet
    comfort to my sensuous appetite

    Do you wonder in amazement how I make love
    to you like the stillness of the night with
    surest movements in concentrated mental
    regard for pleasing you in every way?
    That’s just me being simply

    R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C

    Become overjoyed with the beauty that pervades
    the wells of your eyes with tears that speak truth
    as we hold on for dear life when you realize the
    answer to the question
    "Do You Love Me?"
    is a resounding
    YES!

    Succumb to my warmth and eventually fall deeply
    in love with the necessity I provide to your heart’s
    lifeline; feeding on love’s fulfillment, nurturing
    your every tender, graceful desire to feel me as simply

    R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C

    In the hereafter of our existence in love’s presence,
    whisper those words that silently capture innermost
    thoughts but be sure to speak ever so softly to reveal
    the sensual essence of love’s permanency

    Then let’s love one another as if our lives depended
    on it so we can share in the memories of us both being
    simply

    R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOHHH SSSHHIZNIT!!!

    Dat brova gave this brova chizills!!!:eek: This my friend is on bad...hush yo mouf...just talkin bout this R O M A N T I C piece!!!

    Lawd have mercy on the woman that gets this read to her...

    :toast: To anotha great GQ droppin the word on us!

    Bravo my Brova, BRAVO!!!
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Double O,

    Glad ya peeped and liked brotha!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just like butter
    To write this to your girl almost guarantees you at least 2 get out of the dog house free cards.
    This was tyte bro
     
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    I would have to agree with Shaz. This was so eloquently and beautifully expressed that it may very well get you out of the dog house at least once. (Make it count :lol: !) So glad you're back on the scene blessing us with your flow...

    Much :heart:
     
  6. alyce

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    Become overjoyed with the beauty that pervades
    the wells of your eyes with tears that speak truth
    as we hold on for dear life when you realize the
    answer to the question
    "Do You Love Me?"
    is a resounding
    YES!

    Succumb to my warmth and eventually fall deeply
    in love with the necessity I provide to your heart’s
    lifeline; feeding on love’s fulfillment, nurturing
    your every tender, graceful desire to feel me as simply

    R~O~M~A~N~T~I~C


    I'm all about this entire masterpiece, brotha GQ....

    .. but please allow me to say, the above two verses took me there....and I hung suspended, mesmerized by sweet remembrances passing across my mind's eye....

    thank you! :)

    Alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dizzammmm!!! Q romantically tyght **** flow on and burn
    da house down ..........RED ALERT !!!!!!
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz, MsB, Alyce, & $R - Thanks all for the inspiring words!!!

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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