Black Poetry : " simply put "

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, May 26, 2005.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yesterday
    today
    & forever
    l love you

    ask me
    how
    or
    why
    and my answer is not poetic...

    yesterday
    today
    & forever
    l love you

    my queen
    my wisdom
    & wife

    l love you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like lovin thy queeneth
    the apple of ya eye , stay close to her
    and comfort her for she will forever be .

    very nice write on thy love...................
     
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    HI j'hiah
    wow
    yes indeed
    this was just simply lovely
    WONDERFUL ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
     
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    I won't ask
    how
    why
    or
    when
    I just ask
    that you do...
    ~*~
    today
    tomorrow
    forever
    and
    one day after

    nice piece poet, and thanks for the flow​
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it and the simplicity of it is in my opinion what makes it so beautiful.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...love never has to be complicated
    when its allowed to simply "be"

    hey..."big head boy"... :angel1:

    It's good to see you back on the page again
    I thought you'd retired or sumptin...
    had me all worried... :?:

    I only have one request..."write more" :coffee:

    Your flow is missed....and I loved the simplicity & beauty in this piece :grouphug:

    *BIG HUG*

    Good reading you again!
    Love ~A~
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pure beauty of flowing genuinely from the heart. This was so lovely j'hiah. Flow on brotha.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo..

    :fyi: this joint was cooked up :cook: on side of just keeping it real :court:
     
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    simple and sweet. with a side of beauty.
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bully: P.S. I've missed you!

    :dance3: Was glad to find you still on these pages! :dance3:
     
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