Black Poetry : Simply How I Feel

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to kiss you.
    You have erotic lips.

    Your hugs are warm and friendly
    all of them I desire and miss.
    They are truly to die for.

    Your eyes light up a day and burn deep
    into me when I look into them.
    Each one sparkles like the stars.

    Burning into my heart a never forgetful love.

    Your touch awakens me.
    Girl it is the only thing I desire.

    I stop in my tracks.
    I drop what I’m doing spin around.
    For you I’ll double back.

    Your smell is exotic; refreshing and
    your skin is so smooth.

    Your smile is amazing, entrancing and so hypnotizing.
    Thinking about you is so cool.

    Your voice. When you say anything. Is music in my mind.
    I stand just looking at you when your speaking within reach of my ears.

    I know all about me.
    I want you to know.
    My love is eternal.
    I believe yours is too.

    Lets hook up for a life time. :smooch:
     
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    And this is simply how I feel
    I feel that you and me are the real deal
    baby Hodee wont be an until

    Because its about right now
    Wont be no dark clouds

    But clear blue sunny skies
    I love to get high

    off your prescence when your near
    If I was to cry you would wipe my lonely tear

    As you would plant tender kisses upon my face
    And I would get a taste

    of you
    What's left but to do

    But to engage in pure bliss
    I sure miss

    The way we use to laugh
    I use to miss that one paragraph

    Where you say we would be together for an eternity
    And to forever give me pleasure see

    Until my heart, body, and soul couldnt take it anymore
    I do adore

    You my love
    I feel love like ours come from above

    Cant you hear me calling your name even tho my lips arent moving
    Your voice is so calm like streaming waters so soothing

    And the thoughts of you before I go to bed are always on my mind
    Oh I'm am elated to have been your equal in this lifetime
    Press Rewind

    On our favorite tune
    And I'll be there soon

    So we can make love under the stars
    And we so how loud the bars

    will be in my many ranges
    **** Hodee your contagious
    the lust I feel for you is outrageous
    as were moving to the sensation

    Of the night as it go on
    Noone around as the night air continue to let us be alone
    and we continue this at home

    but all this is for you My love Hodee
    because this is how I

    Simply feel about you..........
    :smooch: :smooch:
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby you know you say the sweetest words.
    I love how you make my mind swerve.
    You know you have on your hands a good man.
    Just say you love me.

    Run your soft hands across my broad shoulders.
    Tell where to touch this moment while I hold you.
    Melting into your flesh.
    I just had a velvet touch.
    Dam your sweet.

    Shhh... Now is not the time to speak.
    I want your silence to my soul to creep.
    Just keep on kissing me.
    I’m into you so deep.
    I will Nevar quit.

    My mouse can’t take the heat.
    Its poor little curser heart just lost a moment’s beat.
    I shook it back to life.
    So I can continue loving you.

    I Nevar knew love could be so good.
    I swear I ‘m gonna scream your name.
    Again my mouse can’t keep up.
    See you are smoking my brain
    Love deep awaking.

    Yesterday I saw the sky it was so dark.
    Clouds streaked and jetted across the sky.
    Light your presence was there for me
    And love it projected fingers across the sky.
    Others were concerned.

    Not me.
    For you shined thru.

    I Love you.

    You have the love to die for.
    So if this was the end. I have lived.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all snap this was hot !!!
     
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    Hodee, My love my how your word are like food for my soul
    I cant control

    the way I feel about you
    leaving this southern gurl without a clue
    but to love you

    the emotions inside of me i no longer can hide
    i must confide

    Hodee that I have never met a man like you
    I feel that the words on this monitor is true

    You must Nevar quit
    You must take a sip

    Of me the gurl of your dreams
    the words that are written makes my heart scream

    hope that mouse of your can keep up
    fast as im stroking these keys my fingers wont be stuck

    but will keep on till this song never end
    Im so glad to have you as my Lover and Friend
    someone whom I can depend

    on
    We must remain strong

    And never let evil or harm come our way
    I long to see the day

    When the sun comes up till we will meet again
    I love you to Hodee, my confidant, and friend

    Words cant express how i feel right now
    but Somehow

    this chance was not a concidence
    if i messed up Lord i will show repentence

    because you blessed me with this strong, black, fine, articulate man
    Im so proud of him I want him to take a stand

    so the world can see what a fine King that's before me
    Oh Hodee set Nevar free

    as she free to love and free to give
    Oh baby I live

    for us
    I breathe for us
    I long for us
    and this is

    Simply how I feel.............


    Hodee I hope through us that we can show the world that are black men out there that knows how to love. despite some that treat their woman bad, but they can see a Fine, Black, Oustanding, Dynamic, Beautiful Man you are to me. And I thankyou from the bottom of my heart for letting me enter your world.

    Nevar..........
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    :smooch:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now Hodee, this was both endearing and passionate at the same time. And very well done responses in flow by nevar as well.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely this jump off like tic for tac this flow was all dat !
     
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    Hodee & Nevar,

    Such a passionate flo. Great write!!!
     
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