Black Poetry : Simply Complex

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  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Simply Complex
    Don’t you remember when what we had was simple?
    When words came easy and kisses flowed like rain?
    But now things are so complex
    My lips search through darkness on a quest for yours.
    My heart slowly tears apart and I can’t breathe.
    Even tears stream down my face with struggle.
    Baby, what made things this complicated?
    When did things begin to crumble and fall apart?
    Was I somewhere off in a field of dandelions,
    Lost indefinitely in your brown eyes?
    When I dream at night, all I see is the simplicity.
    How when we embraced each other it lasted an eternity
    And remember when you laughed and your eyes smiled?
    But somehow we let the storm clouds roll in
    On our beautiful sunshine and here we are….
    Standing face to face or pen to pen
    Giving love an algebraic equation…like
    If we wouldn’t have placed hurt to the third power
    And divided it by long distance and cheating
    We’d still be in that state of sweet simplicity
    But tears were shed and hearts were broken
    And this love we shared was that much more complex
    Sometimes, I watch for you in my dreams
    I quickly try and grab hold of the love I still have for you, but
    All I grasp is the last piece of my heart, slowly floating away
    Baby you have to remember when we were free
    When words came easy
    And kisses f…l…o…w…e…d like rain.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes remembering this speaks out in da voice of pen !!
    scribe on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write
    flow on..i likes this
     
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    oh my
    this flow just touch my heart
    feeling this
    Peace
     
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