Quiet Poetry Lounge : Simply Beautiful..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Absolut, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Simply Beautiful
    By Absolut

    Its beautifully simple...
    how streams of all these thoughts were changing colors.
    Mixes of splendid wonder
    in a summer so grown & blessed
    A morning fresh with dews of Love
    slowly laying on me to rest.
    It was there so simply pressed that all these blues flew into heart
    And from this my dreams would turn forgetfullness into an art
    ...
    .......
    Becoming one from many parts of truth
    for me through real-eyes
    where the start of dawn should risk
    my turning sight through Fluterred Byes.
    and all These days i miss
    They'd wisk away as butterflies
    in times' design
    I stayed..
    in mind...
    alone.....
    disguised...
    as a 'pillar of 'Deny' but cried inside
    this feeling of my own
    So taking me from home
    my hopes are never waking up
    To see the skies of love so forever breaking up
    In red...
    .....green......
    ..purple.....orange...
    Blews
    Til gone away was sadness from this set of rainbows' news
    As happy days just do sometimes...
    I remember you
    ....
    Simply....
    ....Beautiful...
    It's true
    ......although
    You've been gone for so long
    and I pretended it was right
    For dreaming you away because your color was only white..
    these days divorced my ways of light
    And now this winters' night has played me cold
    I've become too old
    to remember why and when
    closing my eyes hoping to dye again yesterday..
    and then I see you....


    I dunno this one sorta just wrote me..
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it wrote you becuase
    you felt a urge
    to express love unto the world
    to bring a light on a gray day
    blending of colors came to play

    wonderful poem...very warm

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    WHOA! That is so modest of you to say that it wrote you, cause you blazed this one so far up into the sky that planes couldn't reach it. This is amazing, poet.
     
  4. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll....

    Its nice to be around such encouraging folks kinda makes me wanna write
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this a masterpiece that wrote u so clear and awesomely
    tyte write keep doing it up this was tweet !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful a flow, all those lovely colors cascading down our minds. Wonderful.
     
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