Black Poetry : simple valentine's want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 14, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...a little late...
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    no flowers
    no candy
    not even a card
    i want...

    i simply want
    to hold your hand
    feeling the electricity
    that has been released
    from your soul...
    transmitted to me

    i simply want
    to feel your chocolate
    lips pressed against mine
    passionately, as our
    tongues do the tango

    i simply want
    to feel your chocolate
    body skin against mine
    my breast against your chest
    thighs intertwined

    i simply want
    to hear you say my
    name...as seductive as you
    do...adding my favorite
    phrase...i love you

    my simple valentine's want...

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FIERCE!

    Sis, you DO be speakin my mind...
    I can always count on you to punctuate it right, articulate it tight, as your soul dictates, recognizing that PURE 'FLO-OHHH!' makes NO mistakes...you allow me the ABSOLUTE PLEASURE of taking it all in, breathe deeply and marinate!

    Thank you, bless your beautiful heart, MsD!

    Real love back ~n~ forth!

    A :)
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ... a little late ... ???

    gurl this is rite on time ...
    365 days a year!

    what a flow!
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I had a Valentine

    I missed all the Valentine fun--but I can see that you were on top of your craft--a nicely layered piece--bringing a little joy and a lot ot thinking--Ra
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet flow..bringing it back.....
     
  6. Chastity

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    dis was nice and simply but still able to make a simple point of wat u want. ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release right here just in time for V-Day
     
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    Beautiful Poet
    Simple-Sweet
    Much Love Poet
     
  9. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was REAL....love the scribe my sis....keep doin ya thang!!!
     
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