Black Poetry : Simple Song of Love

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if I could...
    I'd send the softest breeze
    just to caress your face
    in hopes you'd feel the warmth of me
    I mean if I could...
    I'd recall the way it blows
    to bring your warmth back to me
    and only heaven knows
    that if I could...
    I'd send your name from my soul
    to touch the brightest star
    a most heavenly show
    and if you would...
    allow me to come close
    just to feel the nearness of you
    and relearn how friendship grows
    and if you would...
    just be a friend to me
    I'd be free from all the worlds woes
    and what it pretends to be
    I'm sure we should...
    if only we could
    maybe if only we would
    it'd be so much more than good
    let love be
    what it was meant to be
    I'm sure you would and could and should be
    so much more than love to me

    02/16/03/Michael
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say that Scribe!

    This was for true, for true!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW. I love this peace.
    It's very original, the flow works well and the wording is very clever.
    Great work, keep scribin.

    *Emma*
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was more than sweet, more than romantic..it was so many things that we long for love to be and feel like...nice peace...

    k
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my gratitude!

    Thanx for the encouragement Msluciousb, Euphoria, Kitana!
    Ya'll fo' sho' made my day! God bless ya!:D
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...no question. keep hittin em
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    soft and gentle

    is the only words I can use to describe this piece

    one

    pd
     
  8. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Blakverb I appreciate the pound brah! Much Love!
    It was kinda mushy haha. What can I say? Thanx Sherykah!
    Thanx Poeticdelight! I can't say how much I appreciate ya'lls words!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a display of pure sweetness and a beautiful heart
    keep scribing poet!
     
  10. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich! Ima try and come back suger-free with the nex' one!
    Much love brah!
     
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