Black Poetry : SIMPLE REQUEST

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Things asked , is it all too much
    for a simple kiss and lovin touch
    Words of warmth upon my soul
    and to feel peace within your mold

    To love you completely deep
    hold you in praise ever so sweet
    Just to cherish da smile on ya face
    and live inside the cascading of ya grace

    Is it asking to much to know
    how your love's garden grow
    In depth of such beautiful smile
    gentle walks cross da drifting miles

    To feel where your passion peek
    and taste the fruits of what's so meek
    Can i for a moment in tyme
    request sweet lady you be mines

    pass all & any pain and sorrow
    so we grow like two tender flowerz
    so i may open my heart in yo hand
    as we lay upon da golden sand

    It's just a simple request !
     
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    It never hurts to ask.

    Simplicity begs the questions of our heart's desire :bellydance:

    Enchantment is your forte Brother $$RICH$$ :wine:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cheers brother thankz ....
     
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    i'm amazed

    you went from demanding

    to asking for permission

    what happened man?
     
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    Oh but what a wait to ask such a simple request. I am screaming yes and you ain't even talking to me. You know you work lyrically turns me out more and more every time I read any of it.
     
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    so'ja sometime requesting can bring more goodies then you can think of .....it's more simple
    to behold in a request then demanding tools to work with ya feel me.......lol


    Asimplepoet.....whewww!! was that u i heard saying (Yes) in da mist of my calling
    from da wake of my love wow...Thank u sister ya words touch me soul deep.
     
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    Glad to see you did ask...that's great......who could refuse such a sweet request anyway?
     
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    yes Mizjoice asking in a request brings comfort......thank u sister queen
     
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