Quiet Poetry Lounge : Simple Request

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 4, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Come forth thy loveth
    where art tho, my heart
    loom in a spooled web a void
    lay at the helm of my soul
    i request ya hand and asketh
    my beloveth to share in this
    pleasant warmth

    I simply lone the touching kiss
    wit hope in my
    sweet tenderness i confess my
    love unto u wrap u in my passionate
    meek so ya heart can peak
    come share my forevermore
    inside my radiant soul of praise
    feel my sunshine glaze of a perfect
    portrait

    fulfill my simple request
    by springing lovin grace
    meet me at the alter of hope
    feel my heart afloat twilighting
    skies as i take u into a indingo
    blue as nerve react in a climax
    of sensitivity of cares
    devert the flow of my soul
    hand n' hand we stand together
    a simple request my belove ......
    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
    smile
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful, $$RICH$$ness. Much love to you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this was a beautiful flow, one that can make a heart smile. Flow on.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth vibing like a breathe of fresh air in a maze of love this was awesome had me all in it loving of every word.....love it!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    More than any simple request... this complex juxtaposition of sweet nothings constitute state of the art game.

    WILD!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz gempis my heart was beating sweetly as it was being written

    thankz watz it was manifested from the heart

    thankz angel i pose this from deep within da soul

    thankz 1poet man i let the flow take me , yep a wild trend
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you did and it was a divine pour
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz u again sista fan most humbled
     
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    The Simplest request are always the most beautiful!
    I agree with you sister Angel! You can hear it loud and clear!

    Beautiful!
     
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    Manifested from one heart and felt in another, simply...wonderful.
     
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