Black Poetry : Simple Delicacies

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse my abstraction
    as you begin to read
    However, I'm just writing about
    what comes
    to me when I let my
    mind wonder off with
    my feelings...

    the two will go off together
    for hours and come
    back bearing gifts
    for me to scribe

    I refer to them as
    brain treats...

    A deep sighs escape
    after
    Making choices
    seem as
    Grapes bursting into a thousand
    drops of sweet rivers in my mouth
    filling the imagination with liquid
    creativity
    which feel like
    rain dancing on my tongue

    I also have thoughts
    about
    a gigantic sunset without hope
    and ...
    great minds drinking tall glasses
    of intellect

    Again, I ask that you pardon me.
    These are just a few of my
    abstruse delicacies
    You see, these are the
    delicious words
    and mental idiosyncrasies
    that are evoked from my
    third eye when
    abstraction allows me
    to be

    Me.



    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. OneTyme.

    OneTyme. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're excused.

    Keep speaking & allow your feelings and mind
    to go to that place
    that gives them ultimate
    delight.
    Thanks for the read poet.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes speaketh

    right N2 my soul and free ya mind sistah Queen
    u bring me joy!:heart: :kiss:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OneTyme

    :wave: Welcome, and thank you for the read!

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    :toast: Thanks Rich
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shucks...what more can I say?
    you are definitely a poet.

    blak
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.


    Oh My ****!!!...

    well... jus go head on & be you up in heah...
    my sistah!! :) definite-ly no need to ask to
    be excused!! your scribes NevaEvaEva
    disappoint the reader!!

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Thanks brotha! All I can do is ......... :D


    N2
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well thank you sistah dear! I'm glad to know that you feel my poems neva disappoint a reader......(girl you know how we be harder on ourselves & more critical of our own writing than others are)...

    Thank you for your continued support!

    N2
     
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