Black Poetry : Simple deception

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw her
    Lips kissable
    Hips swaying left to right like my pen in my book of poetry
    Hair soft and delicate like her voice
    "Nope", I said, "this doesn't look like poison"
    i got to know her
    Lips evil
    Speaking things that made my soul cringe
    Hips speading like eagle's wings
    Hair...not even real!
    Poison plain and simple
    I must have been thinking with the one eyed snake
    Failing to open the third eye trying to rest the third leg in her......
    Oh well....maybe I'll never learn............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome flowin ....tyte drop !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow
    indeed
    nice one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here's the first thing to learn..."DEATH LOOKS GOOD"...if death looked like death, NOBODY would go near it right? so take your time...and sex the MIND first...it says a lot.
    the third eye and third leg can never contain the same place at the same time in the mist of lust. just food for thought.
    that was a very tight piece...makes one stop and think
    I enjoyed reading this
     
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    So much in life to learn and hopefully not the hard way. Posed on point, look beyond the book's cover.
     
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