Black Poetry : Simon Says............., Love Me

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if we get past these invisible strings

    maybe we could have a visible fling

    becoming indivisible we could joyously cling

    to each other's hearts

    like we did in the start

    of our movie

    when you moved me

    to sing

    like contestants on American Idol

    for years, i was too idle

    to ever consider taking a chance on making my bridal

    component a reality

    but any rival

    emotions i felt

    at securing happiness began to melt

    once i experienced the totality

    of your sweetness



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet howard , let her know big time .....
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother, you NEED to stop that.

    Whaaat :D Makes me want tomemorize it and woo the first good-looking sister I see.

    Ah, that pulled some heartstrings. Excellent. There's something subtle in all your poetry. So strong, yet gentle. Very nice.

    ~Ikoro
     
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