Black Haiku : Silver Rain...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jul 20, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silver Rain cools me
    I need your love to sooth me
    like sweet moonlight nights

    Silver Rain fills me
    My heart beats and I'm in love
    I want your love honey...​
     
  2. watzinaname

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    Shimmering in drops
    The silver rain showers down
    Dripping with our love
     
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    Drips turn into silver
    silver turns our two :heart:'s into one
    oh, the drops of :luvv: ​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every drop rain dew
    a silver embracement come
    in a raptured love
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i love you honey
    like cascading silver rain
    turning into sleet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This ice storm comes down
    Tapping me on my shoulders
    Sparkling raindrops
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Artic chill behind,
    And when you sooth me, I cry.
    totally all yours.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Warm my chillin heart
    and stop my tears from falling
    so glad your mines​
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    like the silver moon
    the blazing sky looking down
    flowing silver rain
     
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    Dripping sterling is
    the only metal yearned for
    indeed create life
     
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