Black Poetry : Silly....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DIIMOND, Oct 19, 2002.

  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What does a girl have to do to get noticed around here
    Do I have to scream and shout
    and tear my hair out
    before a sister can get some love?

    Do I have to jump off a plane
    with no parachute
    and land on my feet softly and gently
    before I get some props

    Do I have to fly off a cliff
    and keep flying
    high in the sky
    with the birds in the air
    as u stand there in awe
    as I swoop by?

    Maybe I should stop time
    and make it stand still
    and pause this minute
    this second right here
    and go and right this **** over....



    Yeah maybe...


    (LOL) Ya'll know I'm only kidding..... NOT!!! (LOL)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely ya heard loud & clear
    u don't have to do dat
    coz i'm here da honors yours
     
  3. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$ thankx
    I was feeling kinda silly when I wrote this and I needed 2 laugh...
    You know how it BEEZ sometimes
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes feeling the feel here
    and this is what poetry is all about
    write what you feel

    peace

    DSS
     
  5. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks DSS and I will continue to let my heart be my guide as I scribe...
    Just needed some humor friend
    1 Love
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol girl youre funny....
    i love youre work....
    and its good to laugh
    and have humor
    you shure did make me laugh..lol
    but it realy is a beautifull piece
    big up
    sister liberty
     
  7. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again thank you friend for feeling my flow
     
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