Black Poetry : Silly You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ICpassion, Jan 23, 2002.

  1. ICpassion

    ICpassion Member MEMBER

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    Sister,
    What do you mean he loves you?
    Yes indeed.
    Because he always come back to you after being on a screwing spree.
    What makes you think he loves you more than the rest?
    Is it because you accept him for who he is and convinced yourself you don't deserve the best.
    See, its woman like you that want to blame the next woman for your unhappiness.
    When the truth is - you accepted him back after the first time and stayed with him after the second - your reality is your unhappiness is your fault and thats a fact.
    Do you actually think the next woman owe you some respect? Did you have some for the woman before you and will you have some for the next?
    But you have the nerve to complain about his mess.
    See before you try to convience the world that he loves you because your the best ask yourself do he stay with you because of love or because you accepted his mess?


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  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet!

    You working it huh!
    Tyte scribe poet:)
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY THAT!!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wellllllll

    come!

    say that shat!

    a
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Question...

    Hope she has an answer!!!

    Very nice, poet!:)
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    That question has the powerful punch of reality behind it. You've flo'd the painfulness of truth. The rest is up to her. Nice flo. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. Anita J

    Anita J Active Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    i felt this...that ending was cool...i could relate...that was a really good question posed...self reflection stares back at me in paintings like these...thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing Ovation Poet!

    I really dug this piece hea!!!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    A masterpiece of knowledge spoken
    wit no answers yet said hope she see
    ya point u pose poet!.......nice work of art.:eek:
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ICpassion

    ....this is reality poetry! Nicely written.



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