Black Poetry : silly untitled....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silly of me

    Captured up in da bliss
    Of a silly rapture…
    My ish was invaded….
    Twisted lies deceit
    And all…
    Da power of ones heart…
    My word is my bond…..
    Da soul dies
    Heart covers and
    Mind in a closed tunnel…
    Took tender pieces and
    threw them away
    For misuse and mistrust….
    Lies from da soul…
    Outward mark….
    Silly of me…
    Da rose…
    No longer have life…
    For it was black
    The mark of death…
    My ish was invaded….
    Crazy spinning around
    And round…dippin low
    Comin back high….
    The down fall have came….
    Disappoint
    Hurt…
    Just cant believe ya done
    Dis….ummmmm but ya did….
    Should of saw da signs….
    Wooooweeee…..dayum
    Unable ta breath smothered…
    Like someones hand is ova
    My mouth…betta yet a pillow….
    Dats my life…
    Don’t worried not made at you
    Don’t even blame you…
    I blame myself…
    Weave into da web of many…
    Just coz I followed da heart…
    Which mine was true…
    Now its all blue…
    My ish was invaded….
    But was called a .….
    Even threaten…
    Been called out my name…
    So many times…it didn’t hurt…
    Just made me stronger….
    Far as being threaten..
    Ummm..i called my family…
    Da blues of my heart….
    Silly of me…
    Should of know betta…..
    But trust….was da key…..
    Silly of me….kindness and my soul
    Took by bliss of a lie….now I need ta know
    WHY……My ish was invaded.......
    silly of me....

    a blkangel thang...:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa......emotional flair
    deep
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...

    thanks fo da read $RICH$
     
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    wow sister
    much love to you
    feeling your flow
    Peace
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww..sistah bluewater...thank you for da read...glad you like it...
     
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    Silly of me

    silly of me to go around, and brag about the love i found....I say you're the best......well I can't tell the rest

    Puts me in a nostalgic funk!! Good scribe, I understand!!
    Eternal
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey..eternal

    lol i know that song....cool...
    forgot all about that...
    thanks fo da read...
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read
     
  9. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAD to reread this one!! No longer a nostalgic funk, a memory...umph...funny what time tells!
    E
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm agreeing with eternal here...there aren't really any new songs, just different ways of singing them...feeling this vibe.
     
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