Black Poetry : silly of me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by zola_darling, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. zola_darling

    zola_darling New Member MEMBER

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    Silly of me

    Silly of me to fall in love
    With your revolution talk
    When all it was
    Was a conspiracy to conquer my draws
    Silly of me to fall for the phony right fist in the air
    Quoting huey p. and Malcolm

    See I didn’t know cold hearted playas
    were wearing the mask of conscious men
    with your El Che t- shirts
    and natural dreds
    doing poetry for *****

    silly of me to fall for the trap
    walked right into it
    fooled by his engmatic presence
    and how articulate he was
    not to mention hellified sexy
    quoting Angela Davis as he undressed
    saying how the revolution will not be televised as he pulled off my shirt
    telling me how much he loved his natural black sistas as he unzipped my skirt
    giving me theories on who shot b.i.g and pac as he unsnapped my bra
    making me feel like a phenomal women as my panties were torn off
    and snap just like that in his clutch I fell
    silly of me to think just cuz he wrote poetry
    took African American studies
    and wore t shirts with faces
    of revolutionary leaders
    that he couldn’t be a heartbreaker
    liar
    and cheater
    my mother told me never to judge a book by its cover
    because looks can be deceiving
    and deceived he did
    filled up my naive head
    with facts
    knowledge
    and lies
    hymotized me
    with the combination of
    game and wisdom
    had me so caught up
    that I couldn’t
    see the plan
    which was by any means necessary
    to get in my pants
    he undressed me with the revolution

    -shanaye
     
  2. robryant1106

    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: The drop was tight. Unfortunately there are some men out there that will use whatever they can to get some.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a man talks, it helps to know which "head" he's talking with. And yes, we often confuse the two.
    Welcome aboard the ship ...I enjoyed reading you, please continue.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is such a unique story. Soo, interesting. Girl this was tyte. Keep the flow going :)
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some men will stoop to unbelievable depths. I loved the way you cited examples of this revolutionary behavior. And that last line hit the bulls eye. Well written piece. Welcome to Destee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all of this one
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house u found
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    welcome and do stay flow and play poeticly
    tyte drop well felt
     
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