Black Poetry : SILLY CHICKS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Do you feel better?
    I mean you ruined the fun.....
    I told you before that he ain't the one..

    you broke his window.. slashed his tires.. left him a note..
    but he still with that girl... you look like a joke!

    Now we at his house... and what you gon do...
    He already told you that he don't love you...

    I guess it's her fault.. i'm laughin cause now you wan fight....
    I'm out... I ain't helping you... why don't you treat yourself right!

    he layin up with her.. I can't be around u .. u crazy...
    Cause he just using you... instead of leavin.. u talkin bout havin his baby!

    I'm out ... I won't sit by and watch you drag yourself down...
    but word to the wise.. you on ur own.. don't expect him to be around...

    sistah to sistah..... you playin yourself .... that's all
    so to answer your question "hell no, he ain't gon call"

    MOVE ON!
     
  2. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel it.It touched me so deeply that i wonder if it is not a situation you are facing.Love is sometimes strange;it can bring you more sadness than you ever had,especially when your partner doesn't share the same feelings anymore.
     
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    Hi Miss Lady
    This poem tell me you're a good friend
    Giving good advice and these flip
    Action is causing more pain and confusion
    With not just her, but the people
    In her life who cares about her.
    Great write sis. I feel the vent in your flow.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Ooooh, Miss Lady!!!! Ghurl! I was smiling from ear to ear. I got some girls that need to read that flow!!!! You right on the money!!!!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    somebody was wide open

    i see

    yea

    i some point you have to just move on
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

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    Hahaha
    smh

    Still singing that song
    From when you first saw him
    Man you posed ta be grown
    Get up off it
    You speak to me like the Queen of Utopia
    But when he speaks to you
    You are soft Like Peanut Butter
    Asking questions witta stutter
    and then when he yells
    You sit around an pout
    Please tell me when you decide to get out
    once he tells you....
    Or maybe raises his hand....
    You handled your self,me
    and your relationship all willy nilly
    Chick....You are just plain silly....
    smh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    looking out can be painful but seeing wit the third eye is grand
    sometime we have to walk away or get back so one can learn
    when they won't or seem not to listen to truth and reality.......
     
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    Sometimes we feel so hurt, we want to spin into a rage. But most often, we don't actually, because a cooler head prevails. All you can do is state the obvious, the rest is for her to deal with. I feel ya on this.
     
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    More girlfriend should tell their crazy friend "Girl he ain't for you." Sometimes you just have to stop sitting around and watch women destroy themselves. Great write.
     
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    This was too cute!
     
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