Black Poetry : Silhouette

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by epiphany, Oct 19, 2001.

  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I lay here, slowly the dawn
    creeps through my window
    watching your body
    your silhouette in the shadows
    define by the light
    remembering our lovemaking
    I observe your structure
    your tight muscular arms
    reminds me of your touch
    the way you held me close
    your confession of love
    and a tear trickles down my face
    bitter and salty in my mouth
    soon you will leave
    and I will watch as you walk away
    your silhouette now too far to see

    then I smile..........with the thought

    that you will be home.............tonight

    Epiphany(C)2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see what goes away comes back

    the power of lovemaking
    i see him now from up here !!!!:)
     
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    Re: see what goes away comes back

    :love: "LOVE STILL REIGNS SUPREME IN THE HEART OF ALL POETS...IT IS OUR CALLING TO KEEP LOVE ALIVE IN THE HEARTS OF THE LOVED AND THOSE DESIRING TO BE LOVED. JUST LIKE THAT....WARM,SECURE, COMFORTABLE...SUNDAY KIND OF LOVE! WOW:love:
     
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    This was a very good read!!!!!!!
     
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    LOVE the way You ended
    It shined LOVES' light
    BEAUTIFULLY
     
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    Epiphany,

    Your ink pen has such a beautiful touch. I loved this especially, because my husband's job put me in this exact spot at times.
    Thanks for sharing.
     
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