Black Poetry : Silhouette

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  1. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Silhouette
    By Absolut

    Please forgive me if my words intrude on your inner peace…
    But desire has driven my thought to become hostile..
    and I can no longer take “no” for an answer..

    you have what I need and that’s all that I know…
    anything else really doesn’t matter at all..

    I close my eyes and see images of me holdin you in my arms…
    Fanatsies became memories of dreams I need to do..imagine..me making love 2 you..

    Can you see what I see ?

    Do you know how it feels to fly…
    let me show you what I feel inside..
    just be mine for this moment in time..let us become one..
    let my embrace encase you in warmth..lay your head on my heart be at rest..
    feel my pulse greet you through my chest..
    I can not deny my wants..u must abide by my thoughts..
    I wanna make love to your body, your mind & your heart..
    your spirit, your soul, & your thought..

    I want you to..hear my voice when you are alone..
    So when the wind blows you feel me brush against you..
    As the sun shines, you feel your body next to mine..
    And in the rain you feel my tears run down your face..
    I want us if for once in this life to share the same space…
    ..
    God forbid I never have you in my life..
    I dream of the day you say “Yes” when I say “Be my wife”…
    So if ink should stop in my pen, or the world come to an end..
    If there’s anything that u know that is true…
    Should you wonder who in this world really cares about you..
    You would feel that I do..you would know…I love you.



    Abs is new here if you feel me holla


    vodka
    ~1~
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: I'm hollering!! Cause I'm feelin you sweetie!!!

    Tell em to check da floor cuz da knowledge has been dropped!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of love from above
    i bless u friend welcome to the family
    dis piece was no joke ya flow is tyte .......:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUMMMMMMM

    I SAID DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMM

    IM FEELIN THIS ITS:hot: :hot: :hot:
    ACCOLADES MY BRUTAH!!!!
    ACCOLADES
     
  5. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is hot, fa sho. I'm diggin it, I'm diggin it!!??!! Very passionate, well expressed, ordered, imagery (I LOVE IMAGERY), it was beautiful! Thanks for sharing....
     
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    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm hollerin Ab, you got skills on the pen!
     
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