Black Poetry : ..... SILENT

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I SAT SILENT AS YOUR HARSH WORDS TOOK A BLOW TO
    MY HEAD AND MY SPIRIT
    YOU RUSHED ME SO QUICKLY I HAD NO TIME TO DUCK
    OR DODGE THE FIERCENESS IN IT
    SO YOU SWANG LIKE MIKE TYSON BEFORE THE CRAZY
    PHASE, YOU SWANG
    YOU CONNECTED TIME AFTER TIME LEAVING ME IN A
    DAZE, YOU SWANG
    NEVER ONCE MISSING A BEAT
    CAUSING ME TO HURT
    LEFT ME FEELING INCOMPLETE
    "DOWN FOR THE COUNT" YOUR EMOTIONS EXPRESS
    WHILE I SIT INJURED, DEPRESSED. AND LIFELESS
    BUT I WAS ON MY FEET STARING YOU IN THE FACE
    WONDERING HOW YOU COULD EXIT WITH SUCH GRACE
    KNOWING YOUR LOVE FOR ME JUST FAILED MISERABLY
    AS THE TEARS SHOW UP, I WANDER AIMLESSLY
    IN MY MIND, I WONDER WHAT I TRULY MEANT
    WHILE I'M YET STANDING HERE ...... SILENT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....this message taken heartly
    i too use too wonder why and how !
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt u on this one...great write...
     
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    go head gurl go head get down go head gurl go head down this was awesome. this is so you boo please flo on Mz. Mocha!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    strenghth sis .....



    i felt it....


    it touched me..





    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Harsh words that cut like a knife can render one speechless. Boy did I understand this, completely poet.
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's such a shame when words are used to kill.
    The pain, the heartache and the feeling of betrayal
    overwhelms the spirit when we are attacked by such words.
    But just as words can kill, words can also heal....
    Here's some medication.....

    YOUR SPIRIT IS STRONG.
    ATTACKS ON THE HEART STRENGTHEN THE SPIRIT
    ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THIS IS WISDOM AND POWER!

    By the way....

    EXCELLENT POEM
    It's great the way you captured the hurt
    and released it through words.
    Good....VERY VERY GOOD
    111111111111111

    Peace and lovr
    twision
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thoughts from this message
    Nicely done poet/Love your work sis
     
  9. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU

    THANK U ... THANK YOU .... THANK YOU ....

    FELLOW POETS FOR SHOWING:luvv: :luvv: :luvv:

    I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT


    BE BLESSED
     
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    from silent whoosh
    i still feel the depth of this flow
    the in line message..............
     
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