Black Poetry : silent wind

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  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On Friday the wind shifted,

    for what seemed like a moment of innocence
    gradually made it's entrance to my atmosphere
    now the climate here seem's to be racing,

    Feeling impatient cause I felt it but refused to make the changes in my course,
    so of course I journeyed on

    The phasade almost unbareable
    (his) purpose is
    for me to let go of my soul controller
    But I have been through a great tempest and this small wind isn't anything

    I
    myself trying to convince
    me
    of what
    happened so easily

    the wind still's, it doesn't cease
    To be tapping at my window

    When will- he- let go
    The guilt urging to fill

    Waking,
    I play- his -game some more
    hot or cold
    nice and warm

    Can my temperature be indicated by the look on my face
    Is it tracable
    searching for a place to erase the prior happenings

    A lie

    laughing at me
    taking my interactions into attacks
    twisted facts

    But my conscious bares record
    My saviour's stripes like a leopard clothing his mercy for me
    Is there anyway for him to preceive that I didn't mean to be unprepared
    The wind's came at unawares

    Now
    After
    the fake smiles
    it's like what,
    you looking at me kinda rough,
    don't touch me I'm uneasy,
    LEAVE ME ALONE
    can't talk on the phone

    (they don't know)
    know
    (they don't care)

    I'm alone in this sphere cause my love for what he's done for me has brought me from where I use to be that great storm I use to see I mean I just don't like lying.
    So I'm laying contemplating seeking his face
    Because I can not remain a liar and praise his name

    (Jesus save from the highest montain to the lowest valley)
     
  2. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really

    It may be a little soft compared to what some are use to.
    But my message is just don't take the thing's that seem finite or
    simple casually cause they have affects.
    Maybe some of which we do not directly see.
    But character speaks volume.
    Where's the intregity or what do we stand for, start at the smaller doors.
    Moreover it hurt's to be lied to! So we shouldn't lie too!!

    My confession long learning lesson :x:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed i feel ya
    soft or hard it drips deep inside

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes when don't see or feel what is quietly brought, even though the meaning of it all can be just as strong as if it was loud. Creatively put.
     
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