Black Haiku : Silent Wave

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NO NEED TO HUSH UP
    SILENT WAVES FILLING DA ROOM
    SPEAK OUT LOUD TO ME!
     
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    I like this story Haiku, tells so much about so much. Two people not talking, one person reaching our, the loudness of the silence, and the deafness of the other person not hearing or responding? This is a GREAT one $$RICH$$.
     
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    yes Gaylee it captures da moment of hush in silent
    yet words heard in lowtone forth da sound is loud...
    it say a lot indeed thanks for feeling my wave .
     
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