Black Poetry : Silent Thoughts

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  1. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    As I look into the moon light this
    summer eve. I think about the man
    that I once loved. A tear fills my
    eyes as the cloud moves across the sky
    and my hands, reaches up to,
    touch the stars.

    A cool breeze just pasted by me coming
    from the north. And I fold my arm to take
    away the chill, my eyes are closed
    and I envision the night you held
    me close...and renew warmth replace
    the coolness the chill instill.

    You were taken from my life from a higher
    power, and I learned to adjust from your
    absent through the years. I thank the heaven
    as I look upon the stars, for the time we shared
    together... with no regrets my dear.

    I was blessed to have another come into my life,
    and our love day by day has grown strong. We have
    friendship, we have passion, and there is love...
    A deep love, not the same love, a new love, yes
    a true love, yet I still miss you my first love.

    The years have past and I
    have seen people come and go. And my
    children now have children of their
    own. Those I cannot relive the days
    that has come and gone. I just grazed
    into the moonlight, and my eyes fill with
    a teardrop. I am blessed because I have founded
    a new love, but I will never forget you my first love.
    The pattern of life is to move on.

    Peace

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the depth & compassion felt in this piece
    ur pen have much to say
    let the ink flow

    very very nice ......thanks for sharing the warmth of ya heart
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vanneya. It's beautifulthing to move on from sumthing as sad as that ansd you didn''t dwell on it My :heart: is with ya. May blessings be on ya house my sista! Powerfull scribe!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    1 love
    Swt T
     
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    I like this flow.
    It had me dancing with my skeletons. I pulled some of my best memories to the front, and spent time with each one. Your a great writer, this post carries emotion. Awaking moments that should never and can never be forgotten.
     
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    I am glad you liked my poem :) thank you
     
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    Now this was a nice piece.

    Love's come & go, but none stay with U longer than that 1st one.

    They awaken something deep within U that U never knew existed...

    Love.
     
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    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    thank you :thanks: I really went deep within my soul to compose my thoughts into a poem :)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Beautiful....simply beautiful. Heart felt, feelings touched....

    You put me in the moment. The reflection of a love lost...the first love. mm mm mm Beautiful.

    :toast:
     
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