Quiet Poetry Lounge : SILENT RAGE.............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Dec 10, 2005.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awakening from a mid-day nap today, something suddenly dawned upon me,

    "look into the mirror, you are slowly approaching 30"

    Exiting my mid-twenties, "is this where I'm supposed to be?"

    going to school is taking too long, can I pay for that PhD?,

    so young, too much energy, ideas running wild,

    please respect my mind, 27 is NOT a child,

    please hush, I need.....,

    SILENCE

    caught up in a web, where some unknown force is playing tug'o'war,

    should I party-harty, and enjoy my 20's, or spread my wings and soar?,

    I guess I'm coming along fine, some look upon with envy,

    don't take my kindness as being naive, think before you test Ms. SPICY,

    never would've imagined I'd live the life I'm living,

    props to my pops, I recognized game.... man these streets are unforgiving,

    zip it please I need.....,

    SILENCE

    on the verge of conservatism, with all the ruckus in this world,

    I simply close my eyes and drift away, and let the drama unfold,

    now I see what my Elders seem to be so upset about,

    then again...."fruit don't fall far from the tree", GOD forbid I lose my clout,

    SHUT UP ALREADY!!! I need.....,

    SILENCE

    :peace:
     
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    :spinstar: :spinstar: alright ms.spicey you got silence from me but first let me say i enjoyed this and i say flow on spicey. now i'm silent.
     
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    shhhhhh!
    hush !
    silent
    allow me .......

    well felt sis the mind can open doors
     
  4. spicybrown

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    Whisper...

    Yes, most definately....
     
  5. spicybrown

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    LOL........:zipit:
     
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    Silence
    Is what I need
    Like Murder she wrote
    They hating the Queen
    Spicy show me love
    Love in my dreams
    Dreams take me away
    From my pressures and please....

    Silence

    From the world as it turns
    As whites try to move to the moon
    Or is it mars trying to cheat death
    They know the world is coming to an end
    Trying to cheat death its the inevitable
    Its kind incredible scientist dont believe in God
    Then why are leaving the planet hiding

    Silence

    I need some right now
    Spicy my beautiful sista now
    Higher than heights
    I love the way you lips shine
    Shiney like crisco gurl
    I cant believe it aint butter
    Your woman that deserves respect
    So im done..Im gone
    I showed respect nothing less
    I mean

    Silence

    Beautiful Poet
    Love Ya Sista Spicy
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At A Loss Of Words.......Silent

    Like.........:kiss: .........backatya babe. You tend to make me:blush: sometimes.........:blowkiss:
     
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    *applauding* I'm loving every word of it! That Silent Rage is something serious... Continue to Enlighten Me!
     
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    Silent Rage...can sometimes be a cleansing of the soul. Nice drop of inner spice
     
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    My Silent Rage wants so badly to erupt and speak but unfortunately I have no words...therefore I remain quiet and still...Deep scribe, Spicy B...

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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