Black Poetry : Silent messages

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  1. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    SILENT MESSAGES

    There comes a time
    When actions speaks louder than words
    The message is there
    But nothing is being heard
    The way you quietly walk away
    Without fully closing the door
    The pleading look in your eyes
    That says I can’t take anymore.
    What has spoken words ever gained
    More yesterday memories maybe a little more pain
    Silent messages are as hurtful as spoken words
    They sting like a bee or cut you like a sword.
    Sometimes they come across so loud and clear
    To the deaf, the blind as well as those who can hear
    But there are no words to be spoken
    To a young heart that is broken.
     
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    I feel you
    went through the same thing
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very good...the pain exchanged in the air, not a word said, only a glare...i feel you to. the vibes
    Peace
     
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    man...same here i feel u on this
    Welcome 2 Destees!!!! :wave:
     
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    hearts don't break
    they bend...stretch...labor...before pulling back into shape.
    awaiting its next moment of excitement.

    ~WELCOME~
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay Mz Agape Luv :wave:

    This is a beautiful peace !!! So appropriate for what we were discussing in voice chat ... www.************/chat ... this morning! Thanks for sharing it. Thanks for joining us. Looking forward to visiting with you again in the morning.

    Please continue to share more with us.

    :heart:

    Destee

    ps ... Family, MzAgapeLuv has a beautiful singing voice and has promised to share it with us soon ... on the Black Mic ... along with some of her poetry ... so for those who haven't ventured into chat ... yall need to c'mon ... :)
     
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    This is true! Young hearts will pain.
     
  8. angelicsage

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    And we call it ... The silence of communication. Nice piece.
     
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