Black Poetry : silent lusts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 17, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he raped her with his eyes
    she finally let him
    have dem thighs(choocie)

    in her mind he
    was gone be
    in luv with her for...ever

    in his it was
    more like what...ever
    find um, fool um,
    f*** um, lose um,
    was his #1 rule

    gurl was a naive fool,
    the lust he harbored that
    she didnt see,almost
    made him drool,

    so they did what SHE
    called "making sweet love"
    but to him she didnt matter
    cause he only thought of
    her as another piece of ***

    when he was done,
    up and left,
    never even said goodbye,
    left the gurl with
    a broken heart
    and crying eyes.












    :(dis is from ya sad sad sad poetic GODDESS :(
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum...like that huh...:(
    so strong...ya words made me feel a pain that should neva be
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fasho triniti, fasho its sad that people go through stuff such as the above
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it speaks within self
    so many go through the four F thang
    but the light is we can teach to be aware
    of the muzzle men that seek a prey
    tyte
     
  5. ShayShay

    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this brings back memories I know all too well
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich:thank u for commiting on my poetics.oh and thanks again for granting my request.

    shayshay: you are forgivin, as u know, for what u have done,but u know that already right,
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...sad.....well written...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you reading into my past :(..? Jus wanted to know cuz you brought back sumthing I'm tryin to forget...:( but I did like it though:)
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments yall, i hit home with alot of people it looks like, didnt mean to depress or sadden anyone....but im glad u like it

    much luv,
    -story
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @ Triniti---

    I agree. It never should be.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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