Black Poetry : Silent Love

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whisper in angelic tones

    my love so that

    only I might hear the quiet

    sounds of the unvoiced love

    you profess for me

    Relax in my comforting

    touch so graceful and

    charming to bring about

    a soothing calm as soft

    as your own femininity

    This faint but simple

    intimation of serene

    stilllove composure is

    delicate to your balance;

    attractive to my masculine poise

    You are beauty; you are fascination

    when I speak with tame attitude

    of the passive gentleness you

    radiate as your tranquility

    resonates within my soul

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know if you are married or not...cuz ifn' you ain't...you are one dangerous poet. Women could get lost in poetry like dis heah...all night long.

    Enjoyed the read bruh!

    Joyce
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ ..... man u bout to blow up som'em round here wit dis...
    beautifully posed poet!
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Joyce and $R!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Q

    My brutha this was brill! As usual!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  6. misty

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    Very sweet GQ.
     
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