Black Poetry : Silent Lady

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    Playing with
    Past sayings
    Was never what I was deliberating,
    As our unique brief
    Silent moments
    Hold more than just that Monday morning feeling,
    Because it's you that I'm seeing.

    Failed sentences to
    Mental vibrations with no foundation
    Is the reason that my motion towards you is poetry,
    As this unique situation
    Deserves more than just a few words to capture
    Oceans of emotions I receive
    On our
    Too short of a work journey.

    And from one simple act
    You have caused this.

    Your smile,
    Silent lady
    Is timeless...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When something touches us so much, that mere utterances just won't do... You captured those feelings here, well done, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another great display of art work dat's movin
     
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