Black Poetry : Silent Cries....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Momma,

    Thinking of you…upon the heavens
    Another mother’s day break down…
    But this time its not mother’s day
    So I close my eyes to just see your face
    Seeing your gentle smile then…
    I can hear your voice inside my head
    Calling “ baby girl” come here…

    Thinking of you today…

    Feeling your presence knowing your close
    I close my eyes tighter to get a better view
    The pain is killing me slowly
    Can’t seem to breath…
    Inches away from losing my mind
    My walls are closing in my world
    And I can’t seem to push them back
    To see the light again
    As I keep on praying…
    My life is a mess so lost and confused
    Trying to make it…
    But I don’t know what to do
    As I try to move forward
    I go backwards…Closed off in hell
    The cries only happen inside so no one
    Sees me weak…trying to be strong
    Folding fast and I can’t seem to stop
    Not today…

    Thinking of you…upon the heavens
    Momma I wish you was here….

    (c) 2005
    untitled life
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    We never forget....EVER.

    :thanks: for sharing....

    :toast:
     
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    I could definitely feel this, and have been there more than a time or two. A mother's love is forever. Touching flow.
     
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    a forever memory we all hold fear within heart
    i feel ya here sis.
     
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    When your thoughts take you there ...*smile* ...and inhale the warmness
     
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    still hear the weepin of the heart
     
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    The cries only happen inside so no one Sees me Weak!
    I can feel that so intently that my arms go out to you.
    She will love you always, nothing can take that away. :hearts2:
     
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    Beautiful piece Angel, just so you know tears are not a sign of weakness. we only have one momma and its not an easy loss to deal with. God bless
     
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