Black Poetry : Silence spoke for us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, May 2, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the dark
    We sat
    Silently
    Delving into thoughts
    Regrets and questions
    Losing each other in the darkened silence

    In the dark
    We sat
    Silently
    Pondering the others thoughts
    Seeing the changes of life
    Hating the inevitable

    In the dark
    We sat
    Silently
    Crying subtil tears
    Discretely
    Despising the silence
    Yet without will
    Or words
    To break it

    This night
    Like no other between us
    Silence spoke for us
    Telling each other
    Good bye!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was deeply felt man u took it to the max
    and laid it out......flow on bruh
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you could feel the heartbreak in this. Very emotively written.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one caught my heart...it moved me deeply because I took that journey with you...I tried not to, but I got caught up in it.
    that was the bomb, thanks for sharing
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silence is too loud..well put,because sometimes when there's a long pause or no response at all that's answer enough
    DROP IT LIKE IT'S HOT:wink: :read:
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Brother...I've got it bad...

    I just saw your name and I got excited because I knew I was in for a treat... *whew*

    now with that said...


    whoa...

    I love the way you captured what is often the awkwardness of an ending
    of a relationship...when there's no more to be said...when possibilities are
    exhausted and the fight is no longer there...just the silence...
    speaking for you….

    * sigh* Your so phenomenal… :bowdown:
     
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    Wow!
    loved the way
    you captured
    the essence of
    a silent goodbye!
    Tyte!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now ya know i be
    QQ...lol
    gots to this was tight
    just took me....
    come on in voice chat

    come on in voice chat
    :)

    cant wait to hear you on the mic...... :angel1:
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol I agree with all the TWISION struck famlee before me lol This was silently STRONG :) so ummmm when did you say you were coming into chat to read this :look: lol :)
     
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