Black Poetry : Silence Speaks.....

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gaze helplessly it seems
    into the vast extreme
    which is you, and I see
    all I am and all I'll be........

    I feel encompassed by the thought
    which echoes from my heart, you brought
    me to awareness and you've taught
    so much, inside your realms I'm caught....

    not searching for escape instead
    searching 4 new ways inside your head
    in silence I have found my bed
    resting comfortably, so much you've said....

    without a word, without a sound
    enticing me, we're sacred bound
    enlightening energy around
    us, heightening this extasty found....

    the silence speaks...
    I listen...
    the silence speaks...
    I yield...
    the silence speaks...
    I witness...
    the silence speaks...
    I move...

    thank you One..........

    copyright 2001 S.Z.Divine​
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish:
    Very nice write! I really enjoyed the flow of this piece
    and the rhyme scheme was prefect.

    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silence certainly can speak voulumes, as is the case here. Enjoyed this vibe, welcome back poetess.
     
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    Great Flow

    Very nice Twofish

    This is a great flow, and a very good read. Silence does speak and you captured levels of just how loud and strong silence can be.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling this poet

    read like a dream almost

    a dream in silence

    and

    respect

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....felt all this Twofish u really had my mental in deep on this one
     
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