Quiet Poetry Lounge : Silence... Is not always golden...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Closed door,
    closed book,
    slow song,
    without the hook.

    Relationship ended
    relationship start,
    only your selfishness,
    kept us apart.

    Silence is loud
    since you closed our book,
    my slow song continues
    without your hook...



    :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SILENCE OF NIGHT
    SELF LAY IN PAIN
    SILENT WHISPERS
    CALLING NAMES

    IT CAN FOLD
    YET SAY SO MUCH
    SOON NOTHING TO CLUTCH
    O'YES SILENCE CAN HURT
    AS THE BOOK CLOSE

    YET ANOTHER CHAPTER BEGIN
    WIT NEW WHISPERS
    FROM DEEP WITHIN

    SILENCE NOT ALWAYZ GOOD !
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks RICH for leaving that for me. means alot you kno? :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome desr Queen
     
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    I like the ryhthm of this here flow! I feel your silence! Tyte flow!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks purple! I can always count on you for a positive note thanks gurl :)
     
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    ****...what can you say about that.... DAT WAS SWEET!!! (not like candy)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm chessin so hard now thank ya'll for the LUV up in herre I need it fo sho right about now :) hmmmmm starting to sound like my students LOL
     
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    all love given unto u dear queeneth
    u know me i gotta hold u close
    but the sweet thing is yet to come be ready
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

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    this is tyte...the flow is just rite!
     
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