Black Poetry : Silence is Louder Than Words

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quiet
    Quiet
    Silence
    Silence
    is tactic number one
    in analyzing what makes
    you go Dammmmmmmmmmn!
    Listening to your breath
    separate the sweat beads
    as they fall from your face
    gripping particles and cleansing
    the air / so I breathe
    faster to articulate that your
    style I understand as you
    gyrate 35 rpm then drop
    down to seven so you can
    push your moans through
    the canals of existence
    and be-come / Silently
    I listen to the blood crashing
    into the banks of your veins
    and pushing outward 'til the
    **** breaks...Dammmmmmmmmmm!
    you said / each letter
    held onto your tongue to make
    sure I ate the letter that preceded
    it and I begin to fill
    myself with your joy / I don't
    open my eyes because I want my imagi
    nation to practice drawing you
    each stroke an "OOoh" each finishing
    mark a clenched muscle of content
    energy spent you lay atop me limp
    held together by cellular attraction
    but satisfaction has changed your name
    to Cherry so I suck you 'til your
    calcium depleted and switch you so
    your backside can imprint the sheets /
    I do things in silence to hear your
    palms sweat and weep softly / I can hear
    your pheromones singing and see our
    scent dancing on the wicks exhalations
    sparkling the flame as if adorned by
    Orion's fingertips / SSsshhhh, can you
    hear what I hear? The morn is rounding
    the corner of the night to showcase
    you under the sunrays / quivering /
    the lone leaf on an ecstasy tree...
    do you fear of being exposed? Of seeing
    your shadow shatter from sheltered
    shaking hidden under the cloak of the
    night? Conception is near...what will
    you call your rainfall?

    SHE.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb,

    Imma be like GA-Sunshyne in a minute...losing all my damned air from reading "choking" pieces like this!!! Man, this is like a lyrical noose - too tight around my neck!!!!

    A master you be!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a master indeed...

    <<<<fanning...

    ummm... verb... the visuals alone
    got me tryin' to book a flyght!!
    with a tune playin' in my head...
    somethin' like (sing>> )"I wanna be
    where you are... oh!!" :)

    i can't get enough of reading you...
    & that's real!!

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    i love silence ...

    wow ... this is soooo soooo nice
    much skill in your pen
    in your heart
    in your mind

    over-completely impressed!
    loving this peace!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey ya'll thank you, you, and you for the comps.

    one love, blak
     
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    Oh My!!!

    This one had me, positively, reelin'! Extraordinary VERBals; *taking it all in*...
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I am sometimes just speechless at the power you have in words.
    ****, lil' brother! (I smile) I am so proud of you. (grin).
    You know I would like to speak to you in the real sometime... I know you have much to say in this world.
    This is fantastic.... and breathless.... and ..... (speechless)
    :heart:
    Hey.... :wave:
     
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    dayummm...i cant say nothin its just too dayum tyte...
    period....

    peace
    -story
     
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    Oh, myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....I think I'm speechless...

    Wowed!
    Angelic
     
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