Black Poetry : Silence Is Golden

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inspired by Listening to Nothing by Ladysoul

    baby, silence is golden,
    and I’m holding on…
    even though the more that you’re here
    the more I feel alone,
    and it’s not because you’re quiet
    cause your lips continuously move,
    it’s just that the words escaping from your mouth
    seem to alter that special mood,
    you know the groove we used to have
    where neither of us had to speak a word,
    just a glance at your angelic image
    and ‘I love you’ was heard
    and reverberated multiple times
    within regions of my mind
    but now you’re talking
    and I’d rather picture you walking
    succulent angles and graceful curves displaying
    a passionate elegance
    like clouds swaying (matted to a nurturing sky)
    and I'd rather examine your beauty
    than hear one word you’re saying….
    why?
    because once you speak you lose the appeal
    no longer the great fantasy I forged within my mind
    but I forced to realize
    that
    you are real
    with real faults
    (and one seems to come from your tongue )

    so just speak to me
    with that light in your eyes,
    the shimmy in your hips,
    and those sweet moans and sighs,
    let’s converse
    through
    the torrential rains of passion
    from between your thighs
    let sensuous embraces be hello
    lingering kisses, our goodbyes,
    cause I’ve tried
    to really hear you,
    but when I listen,
    I always find myself dismissing
    what you’re saying
    with the way you’re saying it,
    and it’s usually nothing,
    but physical attraction takes over
    manipulating it into
    an appealing something
    and I can’t take,
    me + you will never make it
    like this….
    so when you’ve got something to say
    improvise with a kiss
    not letting pointless words
    get in our way
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dangerously exact.
    I likes.. I likes.
     
  3. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel honored that something of mine inspired you, but this is all you. You breathe life into everything that you write, and this is no exception. You know I love your work, so just keep doing your thang! Very well done
     
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