Black Poetry : Silence and Space

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Mar 12, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

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    She moves between every warm and cold
    aspect of life and beholds a lot of
    energie though they say ...
    she sits still...
    She pulls two people in love
    together following by the
    kissing and love making..
    swings around .....
    as if she starts to make
    music to explore
    the emotions

    She speaks for herself ..
    though they say ..
    she is..
    quit..

    He moves between every warm and cold
    aspect of life and behold a lot of
    energie though they say
    he sits still..
    He seperates two people after
    the kissing and love making ..
    swings between them..
    not brutal only to unlease
    the emotions to connect
    and to remind
    what brought them [
    Together..

    He speaks for himself..
    Though they say..
    he is ..
    quit..

    These two are One..
    and they make love..
    Eternaly.../.
     
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    aww this should have been in sky bleu...
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    You made a mistake in the code.

    Nice poem though. :D
     
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    dunnit ........Yipee!
    thanks monetary...
    much love.........
     
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    libertylaida

    Right black at you lady. ;)
     
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    love ...L
     
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