Black Poetry : silence amongst the masses

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone
    2.47 pm
    (writing to the music in my soul)

    i was once told
    i was denying myself--
    from what i really want

    (pauses and looks around)

    she made me believe her...almost but I

    love her need her make love to her soul--
    every once in every while when we touch or--
    stare or look throughout each other--

    i wish love simplified--

    (urged to speak, but carries on writing)

    silence is--
    resonated thru--
    to the top of my subconscious--
    to the trough of my being--
    and to the crest again...

    around the raging screams and happiness--
    there lies i--
    or stands me, rather--
    silent--because no other sound is relevant--

    (i refuse to go on.)

    sean.

    "I treat u like Valentine's day three-sixty-five a year/make sure that everythang u need will always be right here/and I re-fuse to be your/pre-dictable, average, run-of-the-mill, caught in variety lover..."

    --Musiq Soulchild
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    L*O*V*E*L*Y*!!!!!!
    I can dig it!!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shout out to Phily for the gift of Musiq...

    Sean, you pulled this one from da other side on me...i slipped on it the first time i read it but i won't this time. no doubt i'm feelin' this scribe...

    keep the pen hot...

    dnommo
     
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    silence can be oh so loud

    hearing you

    beautiful flow ThePoetSean

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    o me o my!

    i thought i had hit this one up already!

    terrific flow sean...
    pure magnificance
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank y'all for the read.



    sean.
    :nuts:
     
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