Black Poetry : sik pt. 1

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i could hear your momz tell you
    on your sik bed
    he/she wasn't any good
    and you nodded your head as if you understood

    yeah right :rolleyes:

    your friends didn't expect you in Lovesik Hospital tonight
    they thought you were healed
    but that's not what the "tests" revealed :nono:
    (i bet they're tired of sending you cards
    and letters in the back of their minds saying "**** he/she won't ever get better")

    ((((meanwhile))))

    Doctor Itsmeagain walks to see the same ol' faces with the same ol' cases
    he knows you on a first name basis saying "you know the routine" so you open your mouth for the thermometer for the temperature check and as usual you have a 103 degree "lovesik" fever
    "one more degree means you're sprung
    one more would mean your *** is stupid" he says.

    "oh and the results of your bloodtest were the same, TIL and YPY postive (think it's love & you're playing yourself)
    there were toxins and contaminants clogging your hearteries building waste upon waste"

    he says to switch your "taste" and prescription from "generic brands" to one of substance
    "generic brands"seems to be your problem and not your cure"
    and agaaainnn you ask "are you sure??" :rolleyes:

    you should be pissed at cupid for putting siknyne in his arrows
    paralyzing you from heart to spleen hooked up to this
    eeg machine and your heartbeat's
    irreg-u-let-her or him

    they have just hung a highlit bulletin saying
    " if you have no insurance, you're *** out"

    now you're standing outside of Lovesik Hospital about to pass out
    ~_~_~_~_~_~_~_____________________________ flatline.
    sik
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i'm sorry

    but this was funny :lol:

    nice flow poet

    pdiddy :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin da spray of humor u pose.......tyght scribe to my eyes ....lol
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

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    Sometimes I believe there's an
    epidemic outbreak of this illness.
    For many chronic.
    Nice flow.

    Keep bringin it Poet


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY THAT!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. Rashad

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    Well ****...

    I'm glad I changed my taste from generic to one of substance!!:D
    Tyte scribe Poet!!:toast:
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the talent shines
    man this is a
    *****
    five star production
    feeling the poet
    and how you laced it

    dssNY
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticdelight
    get your laugh on girrirl

    $$RICH$$
    thanx for always showin' love
    xtra respect

    cocobutterskyn
    it's enough BACKteria already
    thanx for the readin

    wildflower
    had your baby yet?? hmmm...
    if not i choose da name :D
    thanx for readin

    Rashad
    cheers to substance :toast:

    So'ja
    madd respect to you alwayz poet
    y' know it

    stay outta da lovesik hospital!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem. Thankfully I've never been there, but sent plenty of cards to friends in there. Nice piece.
    *Emma*
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Euphoria ( tyte name )
    believe your pressence is felt each time...

    nfinite
    j