Quiet Poetry Lounge : Signs Of A Deep Liking

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  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Signs of a Deep Liking



    Sometimes I just sit back and observe the signs of a deep liking
    Lighthearted crush? Naw.. its deeper then that
    In the solitude of my mind I sit back and observe
    Ur actions and body language... u speak to me
    Without producing words u speak to me and I love it
    But I'd love it more if those thoughts of a deep liking were coming from ur pretty lips
    I've made the first move in the past but this time around its my turn to lay back in the cut
    Whats up? Girl u givin off signs of a deep liking
    Theres no "sike-ing".. don't cover up ur feelings for them to re-surface at a later date
    Let them surface now.. cause honestly I don't have the time to wait
    Many times I sit back n observe the signs of a deep liking that u give off to me
    U don't even do it on purpose.. deep inside u kno I touched ur heart so it happens subconsciously
    A happy person u are.. but its more to it then that
    Ur constant smiling after I've spoken.. its written all on ur face... the signs of a deep liking
    Even when words between us arent token.. its written all on ur face... the signs of a deep liking
    The eyes are the window to the soul.. but body launguage is something that u cannot control
    In soo many words u speak to me without sayin exactly what needs to be said
    The word denial is not a friend to me.. as u can see I speak my mind freely n say wuts on my head
    Dont be scared... because around me is where I want u to be the most comfortable
    Just relax and make those signs of a deep liking verbally enunciable
    Audible to speech.. I'm right here within ur reach
    Wether face to face or on the phone..all u gotta do is set the tone
    The time is right and girl theres no use fighting
    Its written all over ur angelic smile.. ur giving off signs of a deep liking.



    -lowkey
     
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    nice drop here .............
     
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    tyte drop.ive been that girl ur talkin bout. funny how the body will say things we're to afraid to voice.much love :)
     
  4. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah

    good to kno that its mo women like that...so now ya'll need to start speakin up lol
     
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    Some of us speak loud a clear.. it's the brothers that don't listen! LOL... nice drop!
     
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    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohh really?? lol


    Well i wish the girl I'm talkin bout was more like u lol


    thank u Toylin.. I appreciate tha love sistah




    love360


    -lowkey
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eh, no problem. I enjoy giving love to a fellow poet.
     
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    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: :spin: :)
     
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    love that phrase..."a deep liking"
    that captures it perfectly
    there's nothing like a "no nonsense" kind of flow
    diggin it...


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    Not love, yet, but a deep liking. I'm with sage, I really like this phrase. And the way you described the body language, yes those signs give us away every time, don't they? Keep flowing poet, I'll keep reading and enjoying.
     
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